Edit/Approval Re: FR - GEIGERRIG Rig 700 pack - Andrew Buskov
- Hi AB,
Thanks for emailing your FR to me. As I said in my message, I have been sick so I wasn't monitoring the list very closely. I only found a few things. Go ahead and upload when you're ready.
My edits, comments or suggestions are listed below marked with ## below a snip of your words.
Monitor GEIGERRIG pack monitor
You - Over the course of the past couple of months I have been able to get in a number of hikes in the area ranging from long day hikes, to a few laps around the walking trail at the local land preserve.
##Edit Please include the actual number of treks you taken, or at least an estimate.
You - the terrain was hilly, but not strenuous.
##Edit Please capitalize "the"
You - There was no precipitation of any king, the wind was calm, and the sky was sunny.
##Edit of any "kind"
You - However, it is something that, while not uncomfortable, a bit irritating if it continues over a long period of time.
##Edit you have a space between "uncomfortable," and "a", I'm assuming there is a word missing here.
- Report uploaded & test folder version deleted. Thanks! See you in two
> Hi AB,sick
> Thanks for emailing your FR to me. As I said in my message, I have been
> so I wasn't monitoring the list very closely. I only found a few things.Go
> ahead and upload when you're ready.