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Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: FR-Gregory Z45 backpack- Andrew Preece

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  • Andrew Preece
    Hi Brett The report has now been edited. The files are deleted and everything has been uploaded. No dramas at all :) I have a 14 year old girl and every day is
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      Hi Brett
      The report has now been edited. The files are deleted and everything has
      been uploaded. No dramas at all :)
      I have a 14 year old girl and every day is some kind of new drama :) you
      better get ready.

      Thanks a lot
      Andrew





      On Sun, Oct 30, 2011 at 1:42 AM, Brett Haydin <bhaydin@...> wrote:

      > **
      >
      >
      > Oops- Forgot to change the heading!
      >
      > From: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      > [mailto:backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of Brett Haydin
      > Sent: Saturday, October 29, 2011 11:42 AM
      > To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      > Subject: RE: [backpackgeartesters] FR-Gregory Z45 backpack- Andrew Preece
      >
      > Andrew,
      >
      > Nice report! I like the pictures included. Just a few things to look at
      > and then you are free to upload. Sorry I took a few days, but work was
      > insanely busy this week. Don't forget to delete the file in the test
      > folder. I'm looking forward to your LTR!
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > I have now used this pack on three occasions. Twice in the hills of Perth
      > on
      > overnight trips. And once on a morning hike.
      >
      > Edit: I don't mind the sentence fragments here, but wanted to point them
      > out
      > in case you want to revise. However, could you please add approximate
      > distances hiked to your trip summaries? It would help me understand the use
      > better.
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > I found unlike other packs I own that I did not need to keep readjusting
      > the
      > straps through out the day.
      >
      > Edit: In American English, "throughout" is one word. Could just be a
      > difference in our grammar.
      >
      > <snip>.
      > The only drama I have with one strap is the load lifter strap on my right
      > hand side.
      >
      > Comment: as the father of a pre-teen daughter, I had to smile at your use
      > of
      > "drama" here!
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > Pros
      > I like That it fits well. That it is comfortable. That is does not need to
      > be readjusted often.
      >
      > EDIT: the first "That" doesn't need to be capitalized.
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > This concludes the field report section. Please check back in about two
      > months for the final long term report.
      >
      > EDIT: Please add the line thanking Gregory and BGT.
      >
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