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Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: LTR-Sunday Afternoons Eclipse Cap-Cheryl McMurray

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  • Cheryl Mcmurray
    Ryan, I forgot to add the date for the LTR so I had to delete the report and upload it again. It s correct now. Thanks for your edits, Cheryl ... [Non-text
    Message 1 of 3 , Apr 8, 2011
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      Ryan,
      I forgot to add the date for the LTR so I had to delete the report and upload it again. It's correct now.
      Thanks for your edits,
      Cheryl
      On Apr 6, 2011, at 6:02 PM, RyanC wrote:

      > Cheryl,
      >
      > Nice report. Just a few minor edits for you to address and then you may upload in the appropriate folder.
      >
      > EDIT: <It has been remained easy to adjust> - seems as if either "remained" should be removed or "has been" so that the sentence flows smoothly -- please correct as you see fit
      >
      > Edit: <the material still looks like new> - please remove the extra space before "material"
      >
      > Edit: <it's folded position> - "it's" should be "its" -- please correct
      >
      > Thanks for you efforts on this test series. See you on the next one.
      >
      > Ryan
      >
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