EDIT Tubbs Flex Alps Snowshoes--Hansen
I enjoyed the report. Just a few edits for your consideration.
EDIT: ".which have somewhat prohibitive camping and hiking regulations."
I'm not sure exactly what you are trying to say but I think if you say,
"which have resulted in somewhat prohibitive camping and hiking regulations"
that makes more sense to me.
EDIT: "Some sections of my hike I felt like I was post-holing." "On some
sections of my hike I felt like I was post-holing."
Edit: The last photograph was not really clear and I didn't think added a
lot to the report. I did enjoy the other photographs and found them
Edit: In your conclusion you only list one like and one dislike. In the
body of your report you mention a couple of other likes that you should
consider adding to the summary for those who just want to skip to the meat.
Your closing should contain a comment that the reader should check back for
your Long Term report on x date.
Given the problematic snow conditions, I'll be interested in reading your
long term report. Can they be used as a wake board? (just kidding of
course) you know the drill from here. Don't forget to delete the report in
the test folder. See you in a couple of months.
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