Re: [backpackgeartesters] Re: FR - Obermeyer Falcon Shell - Brian Hartman
- Thanks Jamie. See you in a few months.
--- On Wed, 1/26/11, Jamie <jlawrence@...> wrote:
From: Jamie <jlawrence@...>
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] Re: FR - Obermeyer Falcon Shell - Brian Hartman
Date: Wednesday, January 26, 2011, 1:30 AM
Nicely structed and well written report.
Just a couple of little 'style' edits below.
Feel free to upload and enjoy your long term testing.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, Brian Hartman <bhart1426@...> wrote:
> FIELD REPORT
> PERFORMANCE IN THE FIELD
> I have been very pleased with the performance of the Obermeyer Falcon jacket and have enjoyed wearing it throughout the early stages of winter. Although I haven't had the opportunity to test it in heavy rain, it has seen more than its share of snow and cold weather and it has performed well in these conditions.
> During my trips,
EDIT: On my html version there needs to be a space between the above paragraphs
Also, each of your subheadings gets lost, maybe italics or underline to make them clear??
> Ventilation / breathability:
EDIT: Capitalise Breathability and remove the spaces around the /
> Comfort and fit:
Edit: I would have this as Comfort & Fit
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