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Re: EDIT - LTR - Camelbak Groove - Derek Hansen

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  • Derek Hansen
    Jeff, Thanks for the edits and for volunteering to be a monitor. I ve made the edits and suggestions and have done the necessary clean-up work. See you down
    Message 1 of 3 , Jan 26, 2011
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      Jeff,

      Thanks for the edits and for volunteering to be a monitor. I've made
      the edits and suggestions and have done the necessary clean-up work.

      See you down the trail,

      ~derek



      On Jan 26, 2011, at 5:14 PM, jjruhle@... wrote:

      > Hi Derek,
      >
      > Nice work on the review and beautiful shot of the canyon! Here are
      > your few edits:
      >
      > "In additional to uses at work"
      > -Should be 'addition'
      >
      > "PRO—No leaks. Nice bite valve."
      > -I feel like a few things should be added here, but this is your
      > choice. You mention up top that you believe the filter works well,
      > and maybe also the fact that it fits onto Nalgene brand bottles?
      >
      > Take care,
      > Jeff
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