Re: EDIT - LTR - Camelbak Groove - Derek Hansen
Thanks for the edits and for volunteering to be a monitor. I've made
the edits and suggestions and have done the necessary clean-up work.
See you down the trail,
On Jan 26, 2011, at 5:14 PM, jjruhle@... wrote:
> Hi Derek,
> Nice work on the review and beautiful shot of the canyon! Here are
> your few edits:
> "In additional to uses at work"
> -Should be 'addition'
> "PRO—No leaks. Nice bite valve."
> -I feel like a few things should be added here, but this is your
> choice. You mention up top that you believe the filter works well,
> and maybe also the fact that it fits onto Nalgene brand bottles?
> Take care,