Nice report. I enjoyed reading about your desert adventures while we are having
a record rainy season. Here are a few minor edits. Please upload when ready
and delete your test file. Enjoy the winter!
>>The Santa Catalina mountains are made of granite, and the trails are very hard
>>and rocky with steep steps from the boulders that are
naturally in the trail path or were placed there to prevent erosion.
Edit: Mountains (proper name)
>>Saguaro National park is split into two units, on the East side of
Tucson the park comprises the Rincon mountain range, and on the West
side of the city it contains the northern half of the Tucson mountain
>>Nothing to add to my observations of pole performance from the second visit.
Edit: This sentence is a fragment.
>>I will have to go over the handles with a needle-nose
pliers to make sure I have all the spines pulled out to avoid
irritating my hands.
Edit: 'with needle-nose...' or 'with a pair of needle-nose...'