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Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: IR-Sunday Afternoons Eclipse Cap-Cheryl McMurray

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  • Cheryl Mcmurray
    Thank you Ryan for your edits. They are all completed and I have uploaded the review to the proper folder. I hope your back recovers quickly. Cheryl ...
    Message 1 of 4 , Dec 1, 2010
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      Thank you Ryan for your edits. They are all completed and I have uploaded the review to the proper folder. I hope your back recovers quickly.
      Cheryl
      On Nov 30, 2010, at 8:56 PM, RyanC wrote:

      > Cheryl,
      >
      > Sorry for the delay in getting your edits to you. I've been down with a bad back. Nice report, I like the photos. Your TinyURL link did not work. No worries, I found your HTML file in the TESTS folder. Just a few minor things for you to address and you're good to post in the appropriate folder.
      >
      > Edit: <My first impressions of the cap is that it is very lightweight,> -- subject / verb agreement issue - consider changing "cap is that" to "cap are that" to correct -- fix as you see fit
      >
      > Edit: <airvents> I assume these words should be seperated -- please correct as you see fit
      >
      > Edit: <and have high hopes that will keep the sun out> -- I believe you need an "it" between "that" and "will" - please correct as you see fit
      >
      > EDIT: Per Chapter 5 Test Report Requirements of the Bylaws, you need to add a statement at the end of your report similar to the following:
      > "This concludes my Initial Report. The Field Report will be amended to this report in approximately two months from the date of this report . Please check back then for further information."
      >
      > See you in about two months. Ryan
      >
      >



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