EDITS Black Diamond Orbit Lantern Derek
Thank you for your IR, your edits will follow. They will take the following
EDIT: Must be changed.
Edit: Should be changed but will be left to your discretion.
Comment: Just that or something to think about.
*** Email Address derek·daught·hansen·at·mac (without cheese)·dot·kahm
Comment: I know you are being comical here but if you want people to get in
touch with you a little bit of change of wording is needed here. Such as
replacing daught and kahm. Some people may not understand the humor.
EDIT: Your product information table text is not bright enough. I can barely
read it on one of my computers.
***Listed Dimensions Compactible
***On the top of the lantern are two fold-down metal "hooks" that provide an
attach point for the Orbit to hang it from the inside of a shelter, for example.
Comment: It may read better saying "attachment point" and by getting rid of the
word "it". Actually this entire sentence reads odd to me with "for example at
***Knowing the expected battery life is about 10 hours (on the max setting), I
can see myself replacing batteries quite often.
Comment: I would use a semicolon (;) instead of a comma.
***PRO--Compactible, lightweight, bright light.
***Please check back in approximately 2 months for my field report.
Comment: It would be nice to have the month listed here so I do not have to
scroll to the top of the report to see when it was posted.
Your HTML looks nice as always!
You are free to upload.
Don't forget to delete your report from the test folder.
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