EDIT: LTR -- Black Diamond Gizmo -- Steve Kidd
- Hi, Steve. Your edits follow...
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"The backpacking trip was a steamy weekend with Temperatures as high as 94 F (34 C)..."
EDIT: "Temperatures" shouldn't be capitalized.
"I did so because the latter are lighter in weight and generally last longer than alkaline's."
EDIT: You don't need the apostrophe in "alkaline's" (it's plural rather than possessive).
"...initiates questions concerning LED's..."
EDIT: Same story -- "LEDs" rather than "LED's" (I have the same instinct when pluralizing abbreviations).
"Concerning other intermittent use; it seems like ..."
Edit: Please replace the semicolon with a colon.
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