Re: EDIT IR OR Graphic Dry Sack--Mar
- Mike -
Thanks for the edits. Changes have made and report uploaded to the site. See
you in a few months.
From: Michael Wheiler <jmwlaw@...>
To: backpackgeartesters <firstname.lastname@example.org>
Sent: Sat, July 31, 2010 1:15:23 PM
Subject: EDIT IR OR Graphic Dry Sack--Mar
I'm not sure if I am really the test monitor for this series but Richard Lyon
sent me an email message suggesting that I was (even though I have not received
any word from BridGeT and the Admin pages don't list me as monitor). So, if you
get or have gotten another edit, disregard these!
Very nice report. Even though they were kind of small, I liked the
photographs. My edits follow:
EDIT: your link to the manufacturer's web page is broken. Please fix the link.
EDIT: "non-breathable...which was expected since inorder for it to be
waterproof it would need to be non-breathable." There are a number of
breathable-waterproof fabrics, such as Gortex. You might want to reconsider
Edit: "The cardboard box measures approximately..." Consider changing to
EDIT: "...or for the storage electronics." Add, "storage of electronics."
EDIT: "...mainly while kayaking in Northeastern U.S. over the next few
months." Add, "kayaking in the Northeastern U.S...."
Comment: While a test plan is not required, since you listed some plans for
testing the dry sack, do you have any plans to use it in combination with a
backpack as well?
I enjoyed reading your report and, if I am truly the monitor on this test
series, I will see you in a couple of months. Please make the necessary changes
and upload the report to the appropriate folder. Don't forget to delete the
report in the test folder.
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