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Re: EDIT IR OR Graphic Dry Sack--Mar

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  • K Mar
    Mike - Thanks for the edits.  Changes have made and report uploaded to the site.  See you in a few months. Kristine ________________________________ From:
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      Mike -

      Thanks for the edits.  Changes have made and report uploaded to the site.  See
      you in a few months.

      Kristine




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      From: Michael Wheiler <jmwlaw@...>
      To: backpackgeartesters <backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com>
      Cc: kmar546@...
      Sent: Sat, July 31, 2010 1:15:23 PM
      Subject: EDIT IR OR Graphic Dry Sack--Mar


      Kristine:

      I'm not sure if I am really the test monitor for this series but Richard Lyon
      sent me an email message suggesting that I was (even though I have not received
      any word from BridGeT and the Admin pages don't list me as monitor).  So, if you
      get or have gotten another edit, disregard these!

      Very nice report.  Even though they were kind of small, I liked the
      photographs.  My edits follow:

      EDIT:  your link to the manufacturer's web page is broken.  Please fix the link.

      EDIT:  "non-breathable...which was expected since inorder for it to be
      waterproof it would need to be non-breathable."  There are a number of
      breathable-waterproof fabrics, such as Gortex.  You might want to reconsider
      this statement.

      Edit:  "The cardboard box measures approximately..."  Consider changing to
      "measured"

      EDIT:  "...or for the storage electronics."  Add, "storage of electronics."

      EDIT:  "...mainly while kayaking in Northeastern U.S. over the next few
      months."  Add, "kayaking in the Northeastern U.S...."

      Comment:  While a test plan is not required, since you listed some plans for
      testing the dry sack, do you have any plans to use it in combination with a
      backpack as well?

      I enjoyed reading your report and, if I am truly the monitor on this test
      series, I will see you in a couple of months.  Please make the necessary changes
      and upload the report to the appropriate folder.  Don't forget to delete the
      report in the test folder.

      Mike Wheiler




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