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Re: EDIT: FR - DRYMAX SOCKS - STEVE KIDD

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  • ftroop94
    Brett, Genetic Deformity is Kind! They called me STUMP on my college rugby team! ~S
    Message 1 of 4 , Jun 30, 2010
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      Brett,

      Genetic Deformity is Kind! They called me STUMP on my college rugby team! ~S

      --- In backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com, "Brett Haydin" <bhaydin@...> wrote:
      >
      > Steve, sorry for the delay, but I have had some ISP hiccups and haven't been
      > able to get back online to send edits.
      >
      >
      >
      > HTML looks great, btw. Overall I found this to be a really good report that
      > I found helpful as a potential purchaser. Your edits are below, and feel
      > free to upload when ready.
      >
      >
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > Particularly, after a day that was over 80 F (27 C).
      >
      > Edit: normally I wouldn't edit a sentence fragment, but this one stands out
      > as odd phrasing. I might suggest ending the previous sentence with a
      > semi-colon and then getting rid of the comma after "particularly". Your
      > call.
      >
      >
      >
      > <snip>
      >
      > I'm said to have rather large calves, so this may only affect me.
      >
      > Comment: I get the same comment. although I generally hear "genetic
      > deformity" in the same sentence <grin>
      >
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