Re: [backpackgeartesters] POST: LTR - White Sierra Trabagon Rain Jacket - askLarry
- Hi Larry,
Just a couple of edits. You know the drill.
Upload when finished and don't forget to delete from the test folder.
All the best,
> The past 2 months have not included good weather for testing a rainEDIT: Not sure what the (?) is for. Just remove it.
> jacket. I packed the Trabagon on a weekend trip for whitewater
> rafting in Ohiopyle, Pennsylvania. Unfortunately (?), it did not
> rain at all,
> Thus, but the time I got the jacket on, I was already slightly wet.Edit: Not sure "Thus" is needed and "but" should be "by". Could
possibly read "By the time I got the jacket on..."
> The hood was big enough to accommodate my biking helmet, but I putEDIT: remove "put". Should read "but I quickly moved the hood..."
> quickly moved the hood underneath the helmet to prevent it blowing
> off, which made my head also feel quite warm.
> Things I liked about the Trabagon:COMMENT: Remove the !, for consistency as none of the other bullet
> Packability (either in its stuff sack, or just crammed in a corner
> of the backpack)
> Good inside and outside pockets
> Bill of hood kept water out of my eyes
points have punctuation.
> This concludes my report on the Sierra Designs Trabagon Rain Jacket.EDIT: Change "Sierra Designs" to "White Sierra"