EDIT HS Long Trail 90 Pack--Lawrence
Nice job! You take great pictures. The report contains helpful information and the layout is easy to follow. Just a couple of edits.
EDIT: You indicate that you did a "multiday" trip. Since we are supposed to be keeping track of the number of nights/days could you state how many actual nights were spent? The same is true with your FR. You indicated you used it on several trips--somewhere we need to make sure the proper number of days and nights are getting logged. I don't know if I missed that the first time. Perhaps this could be handled by simply reporting in the summary of the LTR how many days/nights the pack was used during the FR/LTR period.
EDIT: You refer to 90 L and 60 L without the conversion.
EDIT: You wrote, "...to be an around pack..." I assume you me "all around."
EDIT: You wrote, "The same was the case for the base compression straps base compression straps..." Just eliminate the duplication.
EDIT: You wrote, "...width of this belt caused me issued at the top of my legs..." Change to "issues."
Edit: Check the spacing between the paragraph ending with "sand in my shorts!" and the following paragraphs. At least on my viewer there appears to be too many spaces.
EDIT: You wrote, "For those with a lager waist than me, the Long Trail would be a good choice if after a large volume versatile pack." Change lager to larger. Also consider changing "if after a large" to "if looking for a large." I understand what you are saying but it was a little more difficult to read as written. This is just a suggestion.
After making the necessary changes, upload at your convenience. Nice series. Enjoyed working with you. Hope to do so again in the future.
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