Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: FR - Kelty Foraker 15 Sleeping Bag - Tim Tessier
- All done!
larry <asklarry98@...> wrote: Hi Tim-
Wowsounds like you really like this bag!
Here are your edits for the FR. Any chance of pictures in the LTR?
Anyway, I have a few small things for you to fix, as indicated below.
Please upload when ready, and delete the original from the Test
See you in 2 months. (BTW, congrats on getting the 'puter fixed up!)
Comment: Can you make the top of the FR section stand out a little
more? I found it hard to identify when scrolling through the html
version. Could be done just by inserting an extra blank line or two
below the IR, or making the text "Field Report" bigger, or both.
EDIT/Comment2: According to report guidelines, the dates of the
various sections are supposed to be indicated at the top of the
report, in addition to putting the date at the top of each section
(as you have already done). If you can hotlink from the top of the
report to the top of each section, it would be cool, but not
EDIT: approximately 30 F (-1C).
>>>Either take out the space before the F, or put a space before theC, so that you are consistent. Please correct throughout the report.
Edit: I instantly sat up and, unzipped the bag partially to free my
hands, grabbed my headlight and checked everything out. I could not
find anything that would have awakened me.
>>>I think you need to delete the first `and' in the sentence. Thenit reads much better.
>>>Comment: Funny story, though!Edit: That night I slept kitted out the same as before, Exped
mat, long underwear, socks, stocking cap.
>>>Use a colon instead of a comma between "before" and "Exped"EDIT: milky way.
>>>Milky WayEDIT: I have used this sleeping bag in conditions approaching it's
>>>itsComment: All in all, I have found that this bag exhibits the
qualities one would
expect for a top quality sleeping bag in this temperature range.
>>>I understand you like the bag, but the fact that you were prettychilly at 30 F seems a little worrisome to me for a high-end 15 F bag
just my 2 cents
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