EDIT: IR DaKine Outtabounds Pack - Kenny B
- EDIT: IR - DaKine Outtabounds Pack - Ken Bigelow
This sounds like one complex pack! It's a real shame it is so much
heavier than advertised.
Thanks for your thorough description. I do have several small edits
and a couple of comments for you to consider.
Upload when you've addressed to your satisfaction.
I also typically prefer my hipbelt pockets to open the opposite way
than they do on this pack. I prefer them to open when zipping towards
my body (and obviously close when zipping away from it). On this pack
I have to zip it away from my body to close and towards my body to
open. On other packs I find this method more ergonomically pleasing,
but it another thing I'll be sure to look at in the field as it is
just my personal preference.
### Edit: but it *is* another thing .
### Comment: Some of this section seems redundant, and as you
describe it, it sounds like the pocket opens and closes in the
direction you prefer. You might want to double check this and either
make sure it reads the way you intend it to or re-word it a bit for
The shoulder straps then buckle into webbing straps located on the
day/shuttle pack, but are similar to the ones on the main pack
### Comment: instead of "but" you might use "which" ( located on
the day/shuttle pack, which are similar )
The shuttle pack also has a smaller zippered pocket on the back which
runs around the top and down both sides of the pocket.
### Edit: Something doesn't seem quite right here it sounds like
the zippered pocket runs around the pocket, while I think you mean
the zipper runs around the top and down both sides. You might want
The right side of the shuttle pack has an exterior quick draw ice axe
which is just a vertical nylon sleeve with a gray, plastic buckle and
### Edit: plastic buckle *at* the bottom of it.
The Snowboard straps on the larger main pack where a lot harder to
### EDIT: *were* a lot harder to find
(whereas on the shuttle pack it was on above of the track).
### Edit: Something seems to be missing or not correctly written