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Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT - IR Kelty Carport Deluxe L Arnold Peterson

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  • arnold
    Kenny Thank you for your Edits,  Upload complete and test foder file deleted. arnold ... From: krb84108@yahoo.com Subject:
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      Kenny
      Thank you for your Edits,� Upload complete and test foder file deleted.
      arnold

      --- On Wed, 8/6/08, krb84108@... <krb84108@...> wrote:

      From: krb84108@... <krb84108@...>
      Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT - IR Kelty Carport Deluxe L Arnold Peterson
      To: "BGT Group" <backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com>
      Cc: alp4982@...
      Date: Wednesday, August 6, 2008, 12:49 AM






      Hi Arnold

      Here�s your edits for the Kelty Carport. Please remember to delete your file from the test folder afterwards.

      �Pdoduct description:�

      EDIT: Change �Pdoduct� to �Product�

      �The material feels good and looks like it will dry quickly after getting wet.�

      COMMENT: You might want to add something about how testing it will be the only way to tell for sure because looking like it will dry quickly and drying quickly are two different things.

      �supported by plactic barell�

      EDIT: Change �plactic barell� to �plastic barrel�.

      �I will need at least 16 feet () of space on one side of my vehicle.�

      EDIT: Please add a metric equivalent for 16 ft between the parentheses.

      �This will possible make some sites impractical to use.�

      Edit: Change �possible� to �possibly�

      �I will look at how well the the stakes are able to hold the Carport in place during wind and rain.�

      EDIT: There�s an extra �the� before �stakes�

      �I think it will accomodates several types of vehicles that I hope to be using besides my Silverado which will be used most of the time.�

      EDIT: Change �accomodates� to �accommodates�
      COMMENT: Again consider adding something about testing here as it sounds like you think it will work and actually having it work are two different things.

      That�s all I have.

      Cheers

      Kenny B


















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