Re: EDIT LTR-Hydrapak Streamline-Chad Fike
- Jo Ann, Thanks for the comment, I removed those couple of sentences
that referenced Camelbak and uploaded the revised report-Chad Fike
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Jo Ann Moffi"
> Hi Chad,
> I have just one comment about your reference to Camelbak that you
> mentioned already. It is my understanding that it is not kosher to
> compare by directly referring to another manufacturer's product. You
> will have to take that part out. It is ok to generally say that you
> haven't been able to interchange with another popular brand.... you
> get the idea. :)
> The rest of the report is great, there are no further edits. Go
> and upload when you're ready.
> Jo Ann