EDIT: FR - OR Drycomp AirX Sack - Andrew Preece
- Clothing to change into in camp that would keep me warm and
hopefully be dry to put on.
EDIT: This sentence is awkward, please reword, such as
This was clothing to change into once in camp that would keep me warm and
hopefully would be dry to put on.
On the second night I brought it inside to
check on the condition of *the* my clothes.
EDIT: delete the
The buckle at the top of the sack *show* no sign of weakening and still
clips together well as I would expect.
When I return from a trip my clothes go to be
washed*, then* when dry they go back into the sack compressed just a
little and put away with my other gear.
EDIT: and then
The contents *are, *thermal pants and top, long
nylon type pants, fleecy jacket and socks, wool hat, gloves and a T shirt.
EDIT: Either change the comma to a colon (:) or remove it.
Normally I don't worry about comma editing but in this case it needs a change.
That's it for me.