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RE: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Optimus Stella + (Ed M.)

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  • Edwin Morse
    Curt, I have edited and have a few comments. I could not find a folder for the Optimus Stella. Has one been set up? Edited HTML is in the TESTS folder at:
    Message 1 of 2 , Aug 6 4:20 PM
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      Curt,

      I have edited and have a few comments.



      I could not find a folder for the Optimus Stella. Has one been set up?



      Edited HTML is in the TESTS folder at:
      http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/test/TESTS/Optimus%20Stella%20-%20IR
      %20-%20Ed%20Morse/



      Comments below



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      From: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      [mailto:backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com] On Behalf Of nwcurt
      Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 12:35 PM
      To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Optimus Stella + (Ed M.)



      Ed,

      Here are your edits, noted with **. HTML looks great - upload when
      ready. Please remember to send reports directly to me as well :)

      -Curt
      __________________________________________________________
      The other included items (stuffsack, windscreen, manual and 2007
      Product overview were under a pasteboard shelf.
      **Need to close the parentheses

      [Ed Morse]

      done



      Perhaps not as much as the white gas stove I first used about 30 years
      ago which was also made by Optimus. The Stella appears to be made to
      hold much heavier and bigger pots than I would have put on the old
      Svea 123.
      **This sounds like comparisons to me, which are a no-no. Is there a
      compelling reason to do so?

      [Ed Morse]

      I removed this and added different wording. No good reason and I was
      doubtful when I put it in.



      READING THE INSTRUCTIONS
      There is a very detailed and well written manual included in the box.
      This manual is written in four languages, with the English version first.
      **Not an edit, but it's curious that the box has 8 languages and the
      instructions just 4. Odd.

      [Ed Morse]

      It really is odd and I was wrong about 8 languages. I got out a magnifying
      glass to look carefully.

      There are 13 languages - SE, EN, FR, DK, NO, FI, NL, IT, PT, ES, DE, GR and
      RU. I could only read one.

      It appears that Optimus really is international.

      Ed M







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