RE: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Optimus Stella + (Ed M.)
I have edited and have a few comments.
I could not find a folder for the Optimus Stella. Has one been set up?
Edited HTML is in the TESTS folder at:
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Sent: Tuesday, July 31, 2007 12:35 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Optimus Stella + (Ed M.)
Here are your edits, noted with **. HTML looks great - upload when
ready. Please remember to send reports directly to me as well :)
The other included items (stuffsack, windscreen, manual and 2007
Product overview were under a pasteboard shelf.
**Need to close the parentheses
Perhaps not as much as the white gas stove I first used about 30 years
ago which was also made by Optimus. The Stella appears to be made to
hold much heavier and bigger pots than I would have put on the old
**This sounds like comparisons to me, which are a no-no. Is there a
compelling reason to do so?
I removed this and added different wording. No good reason and I was
doubtful when I put it in.
READING THE INSTRUCTIONS
There is a very detailed and well written manual included in the box.
This manual is written in four languages, with the English version first.
**Not an edit, but it's curious that the box has 8 languages and the
instructions just 4. Odd.
It really is odd and I was wrong about 8 languages. I got out a magnifying
glass to look carefully.
There are 13 languages - SE, EN, FR, DK, NO, FI, NL, IT, PT, ES, DE, GR and
RU. I could only read one.
It appears that Optimus really is international.
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