Hi Andy, thanks for the report. Looks good, only a couple of edits, I
look foward to your updated html too.
> Jacket used primarily as shell a over insulation for
EDIT: wording, should be "as a shell".
> Temps were from light frost to 68 F (20C).
Edit: you may want to add a space in the "20C" since your other
conversions all look that way.
> Thus far, I've been pleased with the hoods fit.
Comment: someone may override me and $god knows I don't want to start
a punctuation war, but "hoods fit" reads awkwardly and perhaps needs
an apostrophe. Or it could just read "the fit of the hood".
>When sleeping with the jacket the visor is
annoying, but I found that I can double it back a couple inches and
it works great.
Edit: Why is visor annoying? Does it snore? :)
>It is inherit to this style of tight fitting zipper
>Once noticeable attribute of this jacket compared to my other light
EDIT: I think you were going for "One noticeable