EDIT: Coleman Cloudcroft LTR - Anthony "TJ" Smith
- EDIT: Coleman Cloudcroft LTR - Anthony "TJ" Smith
Once you address the edits below, you're good to go.
General comment on the Field Information section: depending on the
width of the window, the section can look like its one big
paragraph. Adding an extra line break after each paragraph would
make this section a little easier to read.
> Date: November 10-12, 2006and
> Location: Hurricane Lake Campground, Munson, Florida
> Weather: Temperatures reached a high of 70 F (21 C) during the day
> dropped to 40 F (21 C)Edit: 40F=4C
> significant rainfall (about 2 in (5 cm) in less than 2 hours).Comment: double paranthesis can be confusing, something like 2 in/5
cm or using brackets might help clarify.
> How well does the down retain its loft in the bottom of the bag
> me), after being compressed under my weight for several nights? Thebag has
> retained it'sedit: its