Re: EDIT - Initial Report: Ibex Approach Tights (Pascal)
- Hey Pascal,
Sorry for being late on this, I totally missed it. Here are a few
edits that I found. I would like to see the html version for the
pictures and set up. I didn't see it in the test folder. Can you let
me know where it is? Thank you for your report, I enjoyed reading it.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, Pascal Deschenes
> Initial Report Ibex Approach TightsYou wrote:
> Not only I enjoy wearing tights ....Edit: only 'do' I
> Obviously, wool as some drawbacks ....Edit: wool 'has' some
> A simple drawcord is present around the elastic waistband along with aComment: Here you have both units in parenthesis. Elswhere you have
> small (10 cm x 10 cm, 4 in x 4 in) mesh pocket on the inside.
the conversion in parenthesis only. Maybe do it here also.
> Like many long underwear but unlikeEdit: Ibex has 'assembled' the tight....
> traditional Spandex tights, Ibex has assemble the tight ...
> During thoseEdit: those 'outings',...
> outing, temperature is expected
> Is the fabric composition (Merino Wool and Lycra blend) provides anEdit: Maybe say, 'Does' the fabric composition 'provide'(no 's') an
> adequate moisture wicking?
> Once completely soaked, how fast these tights dry out?Edit: how fast 'do' these.....
> According to Ibex's website, these tights are classified asEdit: underwear and 'I' would like to.....
> expedition weight underwear and would like to see if this
> claim stands Quebec's cold winters.
> days after days, through several washing cycle? Or will they ...Edit: washing cycle(s) (add 's')
> How these tights fit into my backcountry ski boots?Edit: How 'do' these.....
Thats it. I did not see the html version in the test folder, can you
post it again or give me link to it?
- Hi Chuck,
Thanks for the edit! I have fixed all typos (I seem to have a problem
with the usage of "do"...:-) You may have a look at my uploaded
version in the test folder:
Let me know once you are satisfied.
--- Chuck Carnes <ctcarnes1@...> wrote:
> Hey Pascal,Yahoo! Mail
> Sorry for being late on this, I totally missed it. Here are a few
> edits that I found. I would like to see the html version for the
> pictures and set up. I didn't see it in the test folder. Can you let
> me know where it is? Thank you for your report, I enjoyed reading it.
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