EDIT: Simblissity UnSlack Pack - Initial Report -Thomas Vickers
- Simblissity UnSlack Pack Initial Report
April 27, 2006
The link in your html version is good.
Edit suggestions follow enclosed between *** *** marks.
I'm looking forward to reading if this pocket stays in place.
The first is the Circumferential Compression system which is used to
mount the pocket on a pack. This system consists of a length of
shockcord that wraps around the pocket (and the strap it attaches to
on the pack) which is held in place by a tiny cordlock.
*** "As written, "which" seems to refer back to the pocket. How about,
"This system consists of a length of shockcord that wraps around the
pocket (and the strap it attaches to on the pack) AND is held in place
by a tiny cordlock." ***
The idea behind this attachment system is that as the pocket gets
filled, the shockcord can be tighten to hold the contents securely and
*** tightened ***
This is a length of 38 in (97 cm) length of shockcord (with cordlock)
*** remove 1 "length" ***
I use an after market pocket/attachment with all of my packs. The
reason is that I liked to have certain things like snacks, gps,
*** I like ***
Can I attach it to a belt and still access? (waist belt, no pack)
*** "still access it" or "still access the contents" ***