EDIT- Keela Rock SDP Jacket (Curt)
- Gear: Keela Rock Jacket
Tester: Curt Peterson
Monitor: Rick Allnutt
Posted: Jan 25 2006
Edited Jan 26 2006
Nice report. I have no grammatical corrections.
I do have two things I would like you to correct:
Look at your background statement with a view to shortening it by a
sentence or two. The reader needs to know what kind of backpacking you
do, but does not need to know that you have tested equipment for REI in
Look at your test plan with a great deal of energy and with a well
sharpened red pen. It does not read well just as a quote from your
application. By now, most of these questions are either answered or they
will probably not be answered. You may just want to keep those questions
you are still wondering about, or you may want to summarize the findings
under several of the items... I have done and seen it done either way.
But to include many of the items as questions when you have just
addressed the item in your report does not make sense to me.
2) Fit – I will report on any fit issues that arise ...
###Either leave this out or just say that it fits well... You said as much earlier in the report.
6) Water Proofing – Obviously a vital feature of a waterproof-
breathable jacket. Simply, does it keep precipitation from entering
###It was an important question - which you have already answered...
I have no interest in changing your style, but the long quote from earlier reports is not necessary and detracts from what you do now know and have said in this Field Report.
Walk Well my friend,