EDIT/APPROVAL: LTR - Gregory G Pack - Gail S.
- Gail -
Looks good (and I like the picture of you using the pack).
Just a couple of real edits, and some likely Yahooisms. Fix and upload
Thanks for a great series of reports!
Gregory G Pack--DescriptionGregory G Pack
***EDIT QUESTION: "DescriptionGregory" - a Yahooism, or needing
editing? I don't see it in the HTML, so it's probably fine...
The top pocket was
easily removed for such outings, and the compression
straps tightened up any extra room that wasn'tbeing
***EDIT: "wasn't being" (probably also a Yahooism...)
After hiking for awhile, I only needed to make adjustments to the later
because it would some times slip when I was carrying
the maximum load.
***EDIT: "hiking for a while" or "hiking awhile"
Hydration: In my opinion, the ripstock coated-nylon
hydration-sleeve located inside the pack, is a useful
feature when carrying a smaller load for day hikes and
This is only a personal preference, there is
nothing negative to the feature itself for most
***EDIT: I'd suggest removing "for most people"
To sum it up, I some
times forgot that I was even carrying a pack.
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