Edit: LTR Keen Taos Sandal (jjoy / Jennifer #2)
- LTR Keen Taos Sandal (jjoy / Jennifer #2)
Edit by Coy Starnes
Hi Jennifer #2 I thought you would say the dog ate the report. this
is more origional LOL Great Job! I have one edit and a few comments
for you to consider. As I told Jennifer #1 and Rami, DONT UPLOAD UNTIL
GIVEN THE ALL CLEAR! SITE ISSUES. WATCH FOR ALL CLEAR MESSAGE.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "yjjoy" <jjoy@i...> wrote:
> Sorry for being late, a two-day migraine and shoulder surgery (living
> with just a left hand is way harder than I would have ever guessed)
> slowed me down. I tried to get this done before the surgery, but
> obviously that didn't work!
> Thanks, I really enjoyed this test. My last test for a while. :-(
Hope the shoulder recovers and this is only a temporary respite!
> Please ignore wacky yahoo spacing. My final report has no pictures
> unless you think I really need some.
I have one for you to check. (next in line)
> footbed is treated with AEGIS Microbe Shield (TM) which is supposed to
> protect against odor, staining and deterioration.
Comment: When I put this in Word it showed a double space between (TM)
which but on the text version here on the site it does not show up.
weird. just keep an eye on it.
At least on hikes it would take
> a while (except the infamous sand dune hike I mention in my Field
> Report) for the shoes to become unbearably full of little bits.
comment: bits of what? I was left wanting another word or words.
debris or sand etc. I think the "to should be too because in the
sentence I can not replace it with also as it is written but it gives
that meaning. no biggie though, especially sence your editor is not sure.