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Re: EDIT: Tubbs Pinnacle 30 Snowshoe LTR--Dennis

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  • Dennis Shubitowski
    This slipped by me for some reason - apologies. I made the edits and uploaded just now. Dennis
    Message 1 of 1 , Feb 23 10:12 AM
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      This slipped by me for some reason - apologies. I made the edits and
      uploaded just now.

      Dennis

      Mike Wheiler wrote:

      >Dennis:
      >
      >As usual, this is a nice, to the point report even though you didn't have an
      >opportunity to use the shoes much after the Field Report. I just have a
      >couple of corrections and a couple of stylistic comments which you are
      >totally free to ignore.
      >
      >Stylistic only: Your wording "Any snow that we have had has long been taken
      >care of by..."
      >I had a little difficulty reading the sentence due to the "have had has" but
      >your meaning is certainly clear. You might consider, "Any snow we received
      >has long..."
      >
      >Stylistic only: Your wording "The binding is one..., but I also appreciated
      >the overall design of it." You might consider "...but I also appreciated
      >its overall design."
      >
      >"...the binding worked much better and I did not have these type of
      >problems." Consider "I did not have this type of problems" or "I did not
      >have these types of problems."
      >
      >"The Viper crampon thse (these)...
      >
      >"...but it was a very tiring rudder that (did you mean "and"?) I felt I was
      >pulling the shoes along during my walks."
      >
      >"It would also be nice if a storage back (did you mean "bag"?) was
      >supplied..."
      >
      >Otherwise nicely done as usual. You know the drill from here. It was a
      >pleasure working with you. Hope things have quieted some at your house.
      >The baby is due when? Hopefully you will find some quiet time before then!
      >Best wishes.
      >
      >Mike
      >
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