Re: EDIT: Tubbs Pinnacle 30 Snowshoe LTR--Dennis
- This slipped by me for some reason - apologies. I made the edits and
uploaded just now.
Mike Wheiler wrote:
>As usual, this is a nice, to the point report even though you didn't have an
>opportunity to use the shoes much after the Field Report. I just have a
>couple of corrections and a couple of stylistic comments which you are
>totally free to ignore.
>Stylistic only: Your wording "Any snow that we have had has long been taken
>care of by..."
>I had a little difficulty reading the sentence due to the "have had has" but
>your meaning is certainly clear. You might consider, "Any snow we received
>Stylistic only: Your wording "The binding is one..., but I also appreciated
>the overall design of it." You might consider "...but I also appreciated
>its overall design."
>"...the binding worked much better and I did not have these type of
>problems." Consider "I did not have this type of problems" or "I did not
>have these types of problems."
>"The Viper crampon thse (these)...
>"...but it was a very tiring rudder that (did you mean "and"?) I felt I was
>pulling the shoes along during my walks."
>"It would also be nice if a storage back (did you mean "bag"?) was
>Otherwise nicely done as usual. You know the drill from here. It was a
>pleasure working with you. Hope things have quieted some at your house.
>The baby is due when? Hopefully you will find some quiet time before then!