8942EDIT - Initial Report- Spyderco Vagabond Knife - Ralph Ditton
- Oct 2, 2005Ralph,
I have your edits for the Vagabond Knife below. Once you fix the edits you
can upload it to the site.
a plain cutting edge.The blade is made
Edit: you need a space between edge. And The.
molded in such a manner that the handle feels good to wrap ones fingers
Edit: This should be "feels good to wrap me fingers around." It might not
feel good to wrap my fingers around.
The only two times the knife was found short was once cutting open bread
Edit: This sentence reads awkward. I would suggest saying ". was once when I
was cutting open bread."
The second time was when trying to separate eggs in the fry pan when they
Edit: This sentence reads awkward. I would suggest saying ".second time when
I was trying."
* How well it cuts up vegetables such as Onions, carrots, celery,
Edit: Onions should be onions (not capitalized).
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