77590EDIT: IR - MontBell Versalite Jacket - Brett Haydin
- Dec 16, 2013Hi Brett.
Sorry for the delay in my edits, had sick children to manage.
Just some minor points below, you know the drill.
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, Brett Haydin <b ï¿½Thanks in advance for your comments!
>Edit: my legal background wants the Jacket or the Versalite rather than "" marks. I would also pop in a , after summertime to make it clear they're the manufacturer's comments
> Product Description
> The MontBell Versalite jacket, which I will refer to as just the "jacket" or "Versalite," is intended (ideally) as rain gear for multi-day backpacking in the summertime according to the manufacturer.
> The jacket come with a pair of hang tags attached to it.EDIT: The Jacket came with..
>Comment: I assume this is the manufacturer's website? This sentence just seemed a bit out of place to me but I get what you're saying and it is an important observation.
> The website was easy to navigate and clear to understand. ï¿½The sizing chart was easy to find and accurate based on the fit that I received. ï¿½
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