76740RE: Re: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Re: LTR - ARTISANA NUT BUTTER - Theresa Lawrence
- Sep 11, 2013Theresa I hate to do this to you because you just uploaded but I saw one more edit. For some reason the words "Long Term Report" appear in your main title section at the very top of the page. That should not be there since it is a combined report. I just saw that in another persons so maybe it's a report writer glitch?? Please fix ASAP and re-upload.
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--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, <email@example.com> wrote:Ok, successfully uploaded, I must have had biology on the brain when I wrote golgi instead of goji ...
From: Jamie D. <jdeben@...>
Sent: Monday, August 19, 2013 11:10:14 AM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT: Re: LTR - ARTISANA NUT BUTTER - Theresa Lawrence
Thank you for getting this in a bit early. Your HTML layout and pics look great. All links are working too. I especially like that you included the pic of your facial expression when trying the flavors. That pics speaks volumes and certainly pairs with your findings.
Found just a few things to fix, please upload when addressed.
My edits, suggestions and comments are marked with ## just below a snip of your words.
Artisana Nut Butter Monitor
You - The sweetness did not taste like a natural sweet, but a contrived sweetness to make strange flavors like golgi milk thistle, phytoplankton and blue algae taste good.
##Edit – "Goji" This is misspelled throughout, please fix the others as well.
You - For me they all had a sort of odd artificial sweetness that I have found with a lot of foods sweetened with stevia, despite that stevia is a natural root and not an artificial sweetner.
##Edit – "sweetener"
You - Having said that my favorite flavors were the phytoplankton and blue algae because they reminded me of lemon poppy muffins, probably because of the lemon oil, which overpowered everything.
##Edit - Having said that,
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