76628EDIT - IR- Platypus Sprinter XT20 Pack- Ralph Ditton
- Aug 26, 2013Thanks Bob,
Yeah, I was aware of the formatting issue.
I think I have fixed it after running a number of trials in the test folder.
Thanks for the comments on the separation of sentences. Must have been
See you in two months.
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Sent: Monday, 26 August 2013 8:18 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] EDIT - IR- Platypus Sprinter XT20 Pack- Ralph
Looks like a nice hydration pack.
Here are your edits. You know the drill....
I believe you have a couple of formatting issues
Edit: In your Product Descriptions, Initial Impressions and Summary first
paragraphs there is no separation between the sentences as you have done
later on in each section. Only a single return. I would consider either
putting an additional return between the sentences for consistency or
perhaps setting this up as bullet points.
Comment: The other visual comment I have are the captions. Normally they are
centered under the photographs and move with the photographs when the page
is rescaled. The HTML has been set up so that the copy and photographs move
when the page size changes but the captions are stationary. I think the
easiest solution is to change the caption copy to centered to flow with the
All the best,
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