75792EDIT: IR - Helly Hansen Odin Traverse Pants - Brett Haydin
- May 8, 2013Brett,
Below are your very tardy edits. I hadnt accepted the monitoring
assignment but BridGeT assigned it to me anyway, I guess and since my
acceptance wasnt noted in BridGeT, I never received any e-mails demanding
my attention. So sorry about that, but better late than never.
Please make the corrections, delete the test file and upload, ok? Ill be
more prompt the next round and will adjust the FR and LTR dates so that this
test is not dragged out an extra (almost) month.
The Traverse features a 3/4 two-way zippers on the sides of the legs that
should make putting them on easy over my boots.
EDIT: Either make it a ¾ two-way zipper (singular) or 3/4 two-way
zippers (without the a).
On the waistband there is also a printed box talking about the origon of the
name and all the logos in one place.
EDIT: Should be origin.
Instead, they are meant to be used in the mountains where temperatures,
winds and precipitation can change before you can change layers.
EDIT: The YOU word! Please re-word to reflect personal expectations.
Its quite impressive, actually.
EDIT: Should be Its with an apostrophe for the contraction It is.
[mailto:firstname.lastname@example.org] On Behalf Of Brett Haydin
Sent: Tuesday, April 23, 2013 11:02 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] IR - Helly Hansen Odin Traverse Pants - Brett
Dear Mystery Monitor, I have my IR ready for you to red-line. These seem
like great pants for my use. I can't wait to glissade in them! Are we going
to allow embedded videos for that <grin>? Seriously, the html is at:
http://tinyurl.com/a7jj6b7 The text follows. Thanks in advance for your help
on this series!
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