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75071EDIT - FR Chaco Tedinho Boots - L Pontious

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  • Derek Hansen
    Jan 23, 2013
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      Lori,

      Thanks for posting your report. Only a few minor edits and you're good to upload.

      Best,

      ~derek


      On Jan 23, 2013, at 12:57 AM, Lori Pontious <lori.pontious@...> wrote:

      > The day temperatures ranged from 35 - 55 F (2 - 13 C)

      Edit: Using a hypen as a range separator is problematic with temperature because it is easily misunderstood as negative temperatures. I recommend using "to" instead to improve clarity. Multiple instances.

      > I sat down rather hard and sprained my dignity.

      Comment: Those sprains often hurt the most :)
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