75071EDIT - FR Chaco Tedinho Boots - L Pontious
- Jan 23, 2013Lori,
Thanks for posting your report. Only a few minor edits and you're good to upload.
On Jan 23, 2013, at 12:57 AM, Lori Pontious <lori.pontious@...> wrote:
> The day temperatures ranged from 35 - 55 F (2 - 13 C)
Edit: Using a hypen as a range separator is problematic with temperature because it is easily misunderstood as negative temperatures. I recommend using "to" instead to improve clarity. Multiple instances.
> I sat down rather hard and sprained my dignity.
Comment: Those sprains often hurt the most :)
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