68132Re: [backpackgeartesters] Edit: FR - Cocoons Sunglasses - Jerry Adams
- Mar 31 7:22 PMThanks for the edits
Edited, uploaded, deleted
You suggested I change darkness to color or tint, but those don't really
accurately describe what I want to say. If the sunglasses are too dark, then I
can't see in the shade, if not dark enough, then eyestrain in bright sun. Color
or tint doesn't really say this.
From: asklarry99 <asklarry98@...>
Sent: Wed, March 30, 2011 6:37:57 PM
Subject: [backpackgeartesters] Edit: FR - Cocoons Sunglasses - Jerry Adams
I'm trying to be quicker now, so here are your edits for the Cocoons test.
Nothing that needs to be changed, but a few comments and suggestions ("Edits")
for you. Please upload when ready.
See you in 2 months
Comment: FIELD LOCATIONS AND CONDITIONS
>>>Sentences? Obviously this is a style issue, so feel free to leave as is if youEdit: It was a mixture of sun and cloudy.
>>>prefer. Me? I like sentences!
>>>"sun and clouds" or "sunny and cloudy" would be betterEdit: The darkness of the lenses is a good compromise
>>>suggest "tint" or "coloring" instead of "darkness", both here and in theComment: One negative about these glasses is there's a fairly wide strip around
the perimeter that blocks my peripheral vision.
>>>This is good to know!Edit: the sun glasses fit over my regular glasses.
>>>'sunglasses' as one word[Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
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