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68132Re: [backpackgeartesters] Edit: FR - Cocoons Sunglasses - Jerry Adams

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  • jerry adams
    Mar 31, 2011
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      Thanks for the edits

      Edited, uploaded, deleted

      You suggested I change darkness to color or tint, but those don't really
      accurately describe what I want to say.  If the sunglasses are too dark, then I
      can't see in the shade, if not dark enough, then eyestrain in bright sun.  Color
      or tint doesn't really say this.

      From: asklarry99 <asklarry98@...>
      To: backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com
      Sent: Wed, March 30, 2011 6:37:57 PM
      Subject: [backpackgeartesters] Edit: FR - Cocoons Sunglasses - Jerry Adams

      Hi Jerry-

      I'm trying to be quicker now, so here are your edits for the Cocoons test.
      Nothing that needs to be changed, but a few comments and suggestions ("Edits")
      for you. Please upload when ready.

      See you in 2 months


      >>>Sentences? Obviously this is a style issue, so feel free to leave as is if you
      >>>prefer. Me? I like sentences!

      Edit: It was a mixture of sun and cloudy.
      >>>"sun and clouds" or "sunny and cloudy" would be better

      Edit: The darkness of the lenses is a good compromise
      >>>suggest "tint" or "coloring" instead of "darkness", both here and in the

      Comment: One negative about these glasses is there's a fairly wide strip around
      the perimeter that blocks my peripheral vision.

      >>>This is good to know!

      Edit: the sun glasses fit over my regular glasses.
      >>>'sunglasses' as one word

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