62473EDITS - IR- Tifosi Optics- Will Rice
- Feb 7, 2010Will,
Nice write up. Here are your edits. Please look them over and post when ready.
A few of the edits involve the way numbers are written. While I knew what you meant, the suggested edits will make it a little easier and clearer to understand for the reader. There are also some edits that round off numbers that have been converted to metric. Here's a link that gives a good description of this.
There are also edits for metric units. Here's a helpful link that I book marked some time ago to help me out when writing reports.
>"During Field Testing I used the sunglasses for a total XX days, of this XX days were hiking/backpacking, XX days were snowboarding, XX days were running, etc.
> FIELD REPORT
> CONDITIONS AND PERFORMANCE
>Edit: Though not required, it is recommended that you include a statement that summarizes the days of use. Something along the lines of,
See this link for recommended guidance,
> Weather: sunny, windy (10-15 mph, 16- 24 kph), 49 F (9.4 C)EDIT: Change 16- 24 kph to 16 to 24 km/h
Edit: Change (9.4 C) to (9 C)
> Activity: Hiking to top of mountain (1000 ft/ 304 m elevation gain), 3.4 miles (5.5 km) roundtripEdit: Change 304 m to 300 m
> Weather: Overcast to sunny, windy (10-15 mph, 16- 24 kph), 30-40 F (-1-4.4)Edit: Change 16-24 kph to 16 to 24 km/h
Edit: Change (-1-4.4) to (-1 to 4 C)
> Activity: Snowboarding (1500-2500 ft/ 457-762 m)Edit: Change 457-762 m to 500-800 m
> Weather: Cold and sunny, 16-37 F (-8-2.7 C), windy (8 mph, 12.8 kph), 48% humidityEdit: (-8-2.7 C) to (-8 to 3 C)
EDIT: 12.8 kph to 13 km/h
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