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37111Re: EDIT: IR - Danner 453 GTX Boots - Tim Tessier

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  • edwardripleyduggan
    Sep 4, 2007
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      Tim,

      Please note that "EDIT" is placed opposite the corrected version in
      the first two items. My error. I need an editor for my edits. <g>


      --- In backpackgeartesters@yahoogroups.com, "edwardripleyduggan"
      <erd@...> wrote:
      >
      > Hi Tim,
      >
      > Here's your edits.
      >
      > Measured Weight: 48oz (1361 g)
      >
      > EDIT: Measured Weight: 48 oz (1361 g) [space]
      >
      > hereafter referred to as Danners) are Danners newest mid-weight hikers.
      >
      > EDIT: This should be Danner's in the second instances. As a plural,
      > "Danners" is fine in the first use. You seem to have it correct
      > elsewhere.
      >
      > EDIT: Nubuck
      >
      > nubuck [this isn't, it appears, a proprietary name]
      >
      > EDIT: toungue
      >
      > tongue
      >
      > EDIT: preventing your toes from jamming down in the end of the boot
      > while going downhill.
      >
      > to prevent my toes from jamming down in the end of the boot while
      > going downhill. [projection]
      >
      > EDIT: don't give you the cushy feel on pavement
      >
      > don't give me the cushy feel on pavement
      >
      > EDIT Rather, your step feels somewhat flat.
      >
      > Rather, my step feels somewhat flat.
      >
      > EDIT: Throughout the test period we will document the trail type,
      >
      > Throughout the test period I will document the trail type
      >
      >
      >
      > Upload when ready.
      >
      > Thanks,
      >
      > Ted.
      >
      >
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