32112Re: EDIT: LTR Defeet Classico - Kevin H
- Apr 1, 2007Roger,
Thanks for the edits. So much for me English. Corrected and new file
--- In firstname.lastname@example.org, "Roger Caffin"
> EDIT: LTR Defeet Classico - Kevin H
> Hi Kevin
> Seems like plenty of testing. Good stuff.
> There are a few spelling errors and mix-ups between singular and
> which I have highlighted below in caps, but otherwise pretty goodand you're
> OK to upload once you have fixed them.
> Roger Caffin
> Classic(o) Monitor
> > The Defeet Classico socks has impressed my over the course of the
> EDIT: 'The Defeet Classico socks haVE impressed mE over the ...'
> > I initially had worries about the socks feeling so thin. But
> > the socks have been quite durable.
> Edit: better to join the two sentences imho
> > It was machined dried approximately 25 times.
> EDIT: THEY were machine(x) dried
> > The colors remained intact and did not fad,
> EDIT: fadE
> > although there seemed to be a slight darkening of the white area
> >on the cuff.
> Yeah, I get that too. Dirt, I suspect :-)
> > around the cuff, no piling or visible holes.
> EDIT: pilLing
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