19780EDIT: FR : KlearWater Water Treatment - Pam
- May 31, 2006EDIT: FR : KlearWater Water Treatment - Pam
Only one missed word (or need for rewording) to change. I liked the
>Or: http://tinyurl.com/puqkhI think it would have been worth re-posting to the test folder; a few
>I found a few spelling errors after posting the HTML version, which
>are corrected in this Yahoo posting and my original file to be
>uploaded to the permanent folder, but which still remain in the
>version in the test folder. My apologies for that.
times I "found" errors and had to go double check, so it was extra work
- but no big deal.
>My pack weight 37 lb (17 kg) at theedit: My pack weight [was] 37 .... missing "was" or similar ?
>beginning of my trip when I had some heavier clothing with me, and
>33 lb (15 kg) after resupply, when I sent home a couple of
>insulating garments and carried a bit less food.
> Evencomment: if this wasn't BGT, and I wasn't not allowed to be picky, I'd
>with the 15 minute treatment time, I could be drinking water faster
>than if I used the filter set-up due to the ease of use of
>KlearWater. In fact, KlearWater was so convenient, I ended up
>treating water several times along the way for my friends who had
>planned on using a filter, so we could make our water stops shorter
>and they could be drinking water faster!
say they were drinking water "sooner", not "faster" :-)
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