new LOEG script review
- and it's apparently much, much better (and set in England):
Personally I hope that Griffin's capture and the aerial battle will make
it back in a later draft, as those were two great scenes. It's definitely
headed in the right direction though.
Christopher W. Shumway, buried under 1100 unread messages
Softline International, Inc.
- On Thu, 2 May 2002, Christopher Shumway wrote:
> and it's apparently much, much better (and set in England):Not perfect, but as you say, a step in the right direction. I disagree
> Personally I hope that Griffin's capture and the aerial battle will
> make it back in a later draft, as those were two great scenes. It's
> definitely headed in the right direction though.
with you about Griffin's capture however. I think the early part of the
series, when the heroes are being gathered together, frankly drags, and
would stretch interminably in a cinematic feature. I would film the
opening scene with Mina and Quatermain, but when they're rescued by Nemo's
ship, I think Hyde and Griffin should already be established. That would
leave the film more time to develop the main plot.
"She always had a terrific sense of humor" Mikel Midnight
(Valerie Solonas, as described by her mother)