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  • sole_magick
    Don t quite get it sound distorts when travelling across vast bodies of water I closed the door to the 3-ring circuses because I finally caught a glimpse of my
    Message 1 of 2 , Jul 31, 2007
       
      Don't quite get it
      sound distorts when travelling
      across vast bodies of water
       
      I closed the door
      to the 3-ring circuses
      because I finally caught a glimpse
      of my own Divinity
       
      Your presence
      Your voice
      opened a door
      to a very special room
       
      Immense, warm and bright
      I could not speak
      Only felt my feet wanting to dance
      but so many mixed messages.....
       
      I questioned it all
       
      I created the room I wanted
      but I realized
      you weren't really there
       
      You were in another room
      going over your list
       
       


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    • Eric Ashfrod
      Whosa!! Just love the images used here. Brilliant poetry and the first stanza captivates and leads into the poem so well. More praise e sole_magick
      Message 2 of 2 , Aug 1, 2007
        Whosa!!
         
        Just love the images used here.
         
        Brilliant poetry
        and the first stanza captivates and leads into the poem so well.
         
        More praise
         
        e

        sole_magick <sole_magick@...> wrote:
         
        Don't quite get it
        sound distorts when travelling
        across vast bodies of water
         
        I closed the door
        to the 3-ring circuses
        because I finally caught a glimpse
        of my own Divinity
         
        Your presence
        Your voice
        opened a door
        to a very special room
         
        Immense, warm and bright
        I could not speak
        Only felt my feet wanting to dance
        but so many mixed messages.... .
         
        I questioned it all
         
        I created the room I wanted
        but I realized
        you weren't really there
         
        You were in another room
        going over your list
         
         

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