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  • Kirsty Karkow
    ... ***In agreement with Gene. Tanka is usually 5 lines ...short/long/short/long/long though, of course people have been know to take liberties! Kirsty -- No
    Message 1 of 4 , Dec 1, 2004
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      > Actually Gellena, I think that if you add the title
      > you'll have a very nice, short, free form poem, actually
      > either way, with or without a title. Hope everything is
      > well.
      >
      > Always,
      >
      > Gene
      >
      >
      > It's Large
      >
      >> its large mouth opened
      >> the fish waits
      >> to swallow a small fry
      >> a cloud formation
      >> on a clear bright morning
      >> can inspire such daydreams
      >>
      >> gillena


      ***In agreement with Gene. Tanka is usually 5 lines
      ...short/long/short/long/long though, of course people have been know to
      take liberties! Kirsty



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    • gillena2001
      OOps the title should have been only in the message subject, glad you caught that. Much Love gillena
      Message 2 of 4 , Dec 1, 2004
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        OOps the title should have been only in the message subject, glad
        you caught that.
        Much Love
        gillena


        --- In Tanka@yahoogroups.com, "Gene Murtha" <Genemurt@c...> wrote:
        >
        > Actually Gellena, I think that if you add the title
        > you'll have a very nice, short, free form poem, actually
        > either way, with or without a title. Hope everything is
        > well.
        >
        > Always,
        >
        > Gene
        >
        >
        > It's Large
        >
        > > its large mouth opened
        > > the fish waits
        > > to swallow a small fry
        > > a cloud formation
        > > on a clear bright morning
        > > can inspire such daydreams
        > >
        > > gillena
        > >
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