- Dear Sandesh,
I just wanted to appreciate your evolving skill as a writer.
As any English teacher will tell you, the secret of good writing is
details. I was touched by the wonderful adjectives you used to
describe the climate in Bali: "warm" "soothing" and "tropical".
Why, I would have never guessed!
I want to encourage you to continue in your writing. You certainly
show great promise! Are there any more adjectives you'd like to use
to give us a clearer mental picture? Perhaps some adverbs even!
Here are some "adverbs" you might want to try:
I "languidly" raise the grapes to my lips
My personal masseuse "assiduously" kneads out my spinal tension
I "luxuriously" sip tequila in the jacuzzi
I "hurriedly" duck the slushballs that my brothers throw "happily"
Eagerly awaiting your next "postcard" from Bali!