Re: My First Poem....for My Boyfriend's Birthday...Please Give Suggestions!
- I think that it is wonderful. Maybe too good, setting the bar kinda
high for your next masterpiece
--- In Poetess@yahoogroups.com, "jmollard01" <jmollard01@...> wrote:
> What makes me most content,
> What nothing else can possibly mean to me
> Is simply my time with you, any at all is well spent.
> I cannot explain well enough, what to me, you've come to be.
> My lover, my confidant, my friend the start
> In short months, lucky enough to have found my one,
> Who makes me laugh, so clever and smart
> And who heightens all my senses in a way that's never before been
> So on this 15th day of November
> Whether near this calendar date or apart
> I hope you will promise to remember
> That you are with me always, your love simply safe inside in my