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Re: My First Poem....for My Boyfriend's Birthday...Please Give Suggestions!

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  • construction.girl
    I think that it is wonderful. Maybe too good, setting the bar kinda high for your next masterpiece ... done ... heart
    Message 1 of 3 , Nov 1, 2006
      I think that it is wonderful. Maybe too good, setting the bar kinda
      high for your next masterpiece

      --- In Poetess@yahoogroups.com, "jmollard01" <jmollard01@...> wrote:
      >
      > Simply
      >
      > What makes me most content,
      > What nothing else can possibly mean to me
      > Is simply my time with you, any at all is well spent.
      > I cannot explain well enough, what to me, you've come to be.
      >
      > My lover, my confidant, my friend the start
      > In short months, lucky enough to have found my one,
      > Who makes me laugh, so clever and smart
      > And who heightens all my senses in a way that's never before been
      done
      >
      > So on this 15th day of November
      > Whether near this calendar date or apart
      > I hope you will promise to remember
      > That you are with me always, your love simply safe inside in my
      heart
      >
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