14844RE: Re: Please help me with a company's slogan
- Apr 1, 2003
> "We are thinking about (the?) future, think with us".It's not too bad, but it needs editing:
"We're thinking about the future. Think with us."
> > "My myslime na budoucnost, myslete s nami".I quite like the "join us" suggestion. How about: "We're looking to the
> I'd make it something like "Join us thinking about (the) future."
future. Join us."?
Others may have more inspiration.
> The article is optional with no big deal of difference here, I suppose.Never underestimate an article. The definite article is definitely needed
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