I've just completed the first chapter of my fic and i'm looking for
someone to go over it and look for a few things - characterization of
Buffy and Spike, dialogue (does it flow, alterations needed anywhere?
etc), any paragraphs, sentences that you feel are extra/not needed.
Someone who speaks Spanish would be helpful also, because i've had to
use an online translator for some lines and i dont feel they are very
If there is a beta out there who doesnt read Buffy but would like to
check over grammar/spelling etc and just check if the fic flows that
would be great too :D
If you cant do everything then any help at all would be appreciated.
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The fic can be found here, thanks in advance -