Re: [Beta_Unlimited] Beta needed for X-men fic
Hey man, I happen to be a big fan of X-Men and I'd love to give your fic a read through. I can email you all I know about Magneto if you'd like. Just write me an email back so I know you haven't found somebody cooler than me. *sniff* I hate it when that happens. Anyways, it's good your ego isn't fragile because I don't have any tact, but I've been writing for six years so I like to think I know something. Well... um... I ran outta words.
Samus Belmont aka Coke <samusbelmont@...> wrote:
Heya, Im looking for a beta reader for an x-men fic im writing. It'd
help a lot if you've seen the movie, and a little comic knowledge
Basically, the main characters are Magneto and Gambit with the other
characters playing larger roles as well (IE Logan, Storm, Rogue...).
I don't know that much about Magneto's history, so someone who could
help me with his characterization would help immensly. Gambit's
characterization, ive got no problem with.
Its pretty much a movieverse fic, but has my own mixture of
comicverse in it. Its called 'the measure of strength' and ive gotten
the first part written (about 6 pages in size 10 font), with many
more on the way. I also need suggestions on how to continue the
story. Like im trying to decide how i should introduce gambit- is he
already a student at the mansion, or do the x-men find him when his
powers go outa whack in seattle?
Brutal honesty is appreciated. I don't have a fragile ego, so beat it
up all you want. I need to know how i can improve the fic.
this story is pretty much a jumble of ideas in my head at the moment,
so it may take a bit of time for me to get the next part written.
If you're interested, please email me. toodles!
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Thank you for the offer but as I have problems with my
computer and email I'm sorry to say that I can't help
Hope you can find another beta!
Good luck writing!
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- Hey there, I need a Beta for an X-men fic Im writing- my old beta
sorta died on me ;). It focuses on mostly Magneto and Remy, and
though I've got the cajun's character down pat, I need somewone to
tell me if I'm writing Magneto OK, since this is the first time I've
written him. I like people to be honest and tough with me, I have no
ego or feelings to be hurt (grin). Its sucks? Tell me why. Its good?
How can I make it better. Anyway, anyone who responds to this is
going to have to be patient with me. I write excrutiatingly slow as
well as non liniar. Ive got about seven pages of part one for you to
start out with. If you're interested, contact me off list.