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Chapter 2: The Ohter Place
In that other place, there are some green creatures (as specified
before) among other creatures. The green creatures are fighting a
constant battle with these bright orange gnats like creatures called
Maurders. Only thing is, the battle is the Maurders are annoying the
green creatures. The green creatures are called Yoda creatures.
There is tons of each kind of creatures I'm about to name. There are
also tall, hairy creatures called Wookiees. Also, in the land lie
big huge ugly hairy fat things with curly circular horns called
banthas. There are also ugly slimy fat slugs called Hutts and winged
creatures that are a sort of goon called gwythaints. All the
creatures get along, except the Maurders, who annoy the others, the
Hutts that are far too disgusting for sense, and the Banthas that for
obvious reasons don't get along with the others! This is what is
going on there right now:
A Wookiee is sitting by himself at water's edge of a beautiful little
stream when a Maurder flies up to him and says in a little mean
mocking voice. "Um, Wookiee meat. Perfect! That's what I was
The Wookiee does not notice the Maurder. The Maurder inches closer
to the Wookiee gets out it's sharp blood-sucking teeth and sinks them
into the Wookiee.
The Wookiee howls like this "Awwww."
The Maurder backs up after taking what he came for, saying, "Um,
food. Food for the tum-tum."
The Wookiee swats at, trying to kill it, but unfortunately misses and
crushes and kills a Fly who happened to be right by the Maurder! The
Maurder, so scared is it that it flies off as fast as it could.
Lucky it did because only a few seconds later another noise can be
heard in the far distance. A Boom Boom noise.
"Now what could that be, says the once again lone Wookiee.
He spoke too soon, for in the minutes to follow he recognized it.
Boom, BooM, BOoM, Boom, BoOm, BOOM, BOOM! Thudding noise was drawing
louder as the thing, the fat thing approached.
"A Bantha! A Bantha!" Screamed the Wookiee.
The Bantha stormed onto the clearing. Bantha did his love call, not
noticing the Wookiees presence yet.
"Awroow. Awroooow. Awrooww." Which translated into Basic as some
gibberish that meant a love call. Bantha all of a sudden glanced
over and saw the Wookiee.
"Why are you on Bantha mating ground? How dare you trespass!"
"? I'm sorry," says the Wookiee.
Then as the Bantha got ready to charge, the Wookiee got out a weapon
and chopped off one of Bantha's legs.
Bantha howled, "Brucow. Didwrow." Which means "Ow, that hurt! I'll
get you for that!"
And Bantha hobbled off on 3 legs.
The Wookiee decided it was then height time to make a run for it,
knowing after what he'd just finished doing to a bantha, bantha's are
creatures that are best left alone at all cost. If you anger one,
why you'll have a whole herd of them after you! So, not stopping for
a second, the Wookiee high tailed it as soon as he heard even the
slightest sound that might be a Bantha. He left the beautiful little
stream and went on home to his house. Meanwhile, the Maurder who had
annoyed the Wookiee was now with the others of his species. They
were all gathered around a Yoda Creature. The Creature looked up as
"What annoyances!" declared the Yoda creature.
He was currently sitting on a stump just outside of his hut. HE was
eagerly waiting to hear new about his pregnant wife. He was ignoring
the Maurders as they began to try to annoy him. The Gwythaint who
was helping deliver the baby of the Yoda was away from his post. You
see, every creature knew something about these orange-gray rocks was
important. In fact they feared them. They were all in a pile in one
place known as the forbidden area. It was the gwythaints job to
guard that area. They didn't know what secrets they held.
They had a feeling it had to do with the strange lights often seen
there that no one could explain. Another kind of creature I forgot
to mention earlier is the Ewoks. They are a cut little fuzzy brown
bunch. An Ewok was also helping out in the birth of the Yoda. A few
seconds passed and a baby was indeed born to the Yoda's pregnant
wife. They named their son Yoda because that was the kind of
creature. He was the first Yoda creature named Yoda. The Maurders
were not happy! They could kill baby Yodas. They couldn't understand
them. They had tried to kill Yodas before. They went at Yoda and
almost killed the poor baby. The severely injured him. The
Gwythaint quickly flew to get the together gwythaints. There were no
gwythaints left at the post. Who would go there anyway? No one
wanted to go there...
Now, again I shall take you back to Sky, Walker, Jed, I, Iot,
and Id. Now, keep in mind this is happening at the same time as all
the creatures' happenings. It's still the day of the meeting. The
race is about to start, the race between Id, Walker, and Jed, plus
all the other men in the area. This was to take place 4 hours before
the meeting to be held later. So, Walker, Jed, and Id got ready for
the big race. IT was held once a year. Walker had been the champion
for years. Id thought it could be different this time, for he rigged
Walker's ship. Sky and I went up to their lovers and gave them big
hugs and kisses. Now the race was ready to commence.