Seeking style beta for original fiction
I'm looking for a beta reader for an original slash story. If you're
interested, please read on.
Title: The Book of Calling
Rating: MA or NC-17
Length: 50,000+ words
Potentially offensive material includes: Satanism, gay men, sex,
adultery, religion, discrimination, rape, magic, and mentioned incest.
Summary: Late at night, an employee stumbles across a Satanic ritual,
shortly followed by deaths of his co-workers. He sets out to discover
the culprits and his own sexuality. But he's not prepared for what he
(You can read the first few chapters here:
I want a beta for writing style: someone who can tell me I use "was"
too many times in one paragraph, a beta who can correct what many
readers think is great writing, a beta who will tell me I need more
I want a beta who will tell me exactly what is good or bad. And I do
need someone to tell me when I'm being unrealistic. Sometimes I get
carried away... ;-)
Are you that person? If you think you can take on this task, please
email me: xxuniq@...