need beta reader
- I've written a what-if back history for the Marvel
character Exodus (Bennet du Paris) and his friendship
with the original Black Knight (Eobar Barrington)
set during the 2nd Crusades. It was written in response
to CFan's orphan Ideas board story challenge.
I need some suggestions on how to break up a lengthy
paragraph that's more what should go in there, then what
actualy story, for the last two scenes, if could find
someone who's willing to take a look at it, and help me
wrap up the ending, I would be a very 'happy camper<g>
The story can be found at (http://members.tripod.com/~Karrenia/
- i am looking for a beta reader for a batman/wonder woman fanfiction.
If you want to help me gice me an email at icemanpeak@...